My name´s Gabriela. I´m from Venezuela and I´m a student at the IPC. There I´m preparing to become an english teacher. I really enjoy my career, and I hope to achieve all my goals. I also work as an english teacher, which is perfect for me, because it helps me develop new skills.That´s it for now,any comments are well received. Enjoy my blog.
{July 9, 2006} just me
Great Gabriela!!!
I think you don’t say so much about yourself, though. Personality or physical appearence.
Nahir.
Hello Gabriela!
I think your piece of work is to short to give a rich feedback. However, I think you have good skills on writing and you could work a little harder. Remember that this seminar is for learning how to write properly; it means that you are not supposed to know all about it. It is important for you to notice that if your work is poor, the feedback you will receive is going to be poor too. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes because that is what it is about. Remember that we can also learn a lot from our mistakes.
Check grammar on the following: (There, I’m preparing to….). The use of THERE at the begining of that sentence sounds Spanglish. Ask Nahir for more info about it. PLEASE!!!! Write more
Hiya girl! Well, I think you were very objective on what you wanted us to know about you, however, some additional information wouldn’t hurt. I don’t know, but from what I can see you have deffinitely developed very good writing skills, so you should explode them. Regarding your paragraph I think that “all of my goals” would sound even better since it kind of includes all and each one of your goals. Finally I also think that the phrases “for the moment”, “so far” would sound better than for now specifically in that context. Very well done, carry on like that and good luck with your job! Regards!
wow!!!!!those were some good advices…I didn’t put more information, because I really don’t like talking a lot about me. I don’t know it just feels weird. I would prefer people would find out things about me from my writings, perhaps implicit…..Thanks anyway.Try to check my narration when I post it…..